Monday, January 19, 2009

Atop the himalayas..

Upon a hill
Overlooking a valley
Stars smiling down on us.

You , me with fireflies for company...

We make oh-so-sweet love
like never before, but for ever after
unleashing ourselves like doves
leaving our bodies behind
We fly away with fireflies for company..
-- Firefly

2 comments:

  1. Your poems reflect the current personality of yours which is slightly different from the person, I've know while in hostel. The incompleteness in these poems add to the charm. I am sure, if you regularly keep writing, you will see a pattern of your life. The changing states of mind always are best expressed on paper.

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  2. I followed your scent to India.
    ..shame you were already gone.
    At least there was Toukyou.
    (And) clues to follow.
    I think I appreciate
    meaningless shapes.
    Patterns which-
    mean nothing
    inherently.
    Judgments
    clouded.
    Better
    just
    to
    (fade)..
    ..!and
    follow-
    silently,
    harmlessly;
    hopelessly..
    ~<3 (What never left)
    Briefly- and all spatial interests aside- I regret my immaturity leading me to be unable to fulfill (what is certainly) such a fantasy.
    You probably don't exactly believe in such a self-defensive force as a military; but I've seen, experienced, and directly contributed to more personal humanitarian interests than I ever held (or could have even imagined I would) at Lindbergh.
    You may never know how correct you were in saying "puzzle pieces".
    Your writing is intriguing to say the least.
    I await your reply more cautiously and patiently than you'll expect.

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